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yourself", "which one of these topics can i write about more confidently ?", "to break down the thinking process , to decide which topic to choose", "first , i think the topic medicine is too large to cover it", " #2 there are a lot of materials on the environment", "but i am really not interested enough in the topic", "#3 i can find many sources on education and i have my own opinions about our educational system", "#4 having written these points and process ,this information", "making a decision becomes an easy task", "obviously , i choose to write about education", "since , i am passionate about the topic", " before writing an essay , we need to do some free thinking and free writing , that is", "think of anything you would like to say or write about , then do some free writing", "what is free writing ?", "free writing is the practice of writing down all your ideas and thoughts that come to mind without stopping", "and without regard for grammar , spelling , coherence , or others responses", "back up support or any rules we usually follow during writing", "we do free writing to help generate ideas", "and get us focused on what we really want to say about a given subject", "write down whatever you want to say about education", "example : some ideas that i may want to discuss about education are :", "children should learn life skills at school such as : decision making , dealing with anger", "sharing , empathy ,self confidence and creativity", "school should help children learn respect ,safety rules", "self defense , how to deal with others ,and the danger of bullying", "children should learn through play , field visits , and school projects", "they should learn responsibility by taking care of a pet and their own things", "young children should not have homework", "examine the education in Finland and japan as models for better educational systems", "school should have space for children to run and play", "teachers should take play time very seriously", "teachers need reformed training in modern education", "after writing whatever comes to mind , now i need to decide which ones i want to include in my essay", "and which i feel are not important to cover", "once i know what issues i would like to write about", "need to make a mind map to organize all these ideas", "so what is a mind map ?", " if i give you the Cambridge dictionary for a mind map", "it says : it is a type of diagram or simple plan with lines and circles for organizing information", "so that it is easier to use or remember", "there are many different design for mind map", "as you create your mind map ,make sure the main ideas or titles are clear", "and are placed at the center , so that more ideas can branch of the main concept", "creating subtitles", "next , take every subtitle and write a paragraph or more on the subject", "make sure you include in your writing", "the point that you are trying to make", "an explanation of the idea", "evidence to support your idea", "the sources you are using to show that you have knowledge of previous studies", "now after you finish or several paragraphs on each subtitle", "you organize these pieces and link ideas to each other", "then you do the same with every subtitle", "you can always return and add information , or cross out information", "finally , after organizing paragraph you can create an outline to guide your writing", "and make sure all your ideas are connected and fall under the correct category", "or the subtitle you use", "this process also helps make sure you do not repeat yourself", "once you look at what you have created", "you may decide to cross some items off the mind map", " if you feel they are no longer necessary", "or even , expand on some issues if you want", "throughout your writing , you may make modifications to the outline", "at any time", "an organized mind map , can work as an outline for the whole essay", " for the mind map on education", "the main concept fall under 4 points :", "#1 teacher training", " which includes dealing with children", "new teaching methods , and creativity", "#2 modeling of education and we have japan and Finland", " #3 values learnt like respect ,confidence ,caring and sharing", "#4 values put into practice", "you have school projects , field trips , learn though play", "your mind map is now ready , please save it and we will be using it in the next video" ] }